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I need feedback about the graphics of my prototype

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Hey everybody !
I'd like to get your opinion on the graphics of a game prototype I'm working on: I have a pixel art version and a "kid's drawing" version and I wanted to know which one you prefer, and why? I specify that the game takes place in a universe where children's stories have been "corrupted" by evil, the graphics are therefore justified by the game universe, which is both childish and creepy;) If you have any general remarks on what you like / dislike or general feedback to share that interests me too! Thanks to those who will answer :)

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I personally like the pixel art version. The other one looks too amateur-ish. Also, it's my understanding that child stories are rarely illustrated in a "kid's drawing" style.
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Thanks for the feedback ! Yeah it’s actually more a game inside the imagination of children, that’s what I meant by « children story » (sorry if that was not clear, I’m French).
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As much as I like pixel art in general, I like the bottom version better. The style is more unique.
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I agree, i usually tend to dislike art that has this weird unexplainable flash-like sterility to it, however the bottom version imo could work since it has an unique style instead.
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It's a Pick Your Poison situation.
The top is "just disturbing". The bottom is "just childish". I personally go with the bottom one since your intended audience are kids.
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Both are not perfect, but I'd prefer the bottom one.. the pixel art isnt that great while the child drawing style is more unique and appealing.
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Thanks for all the answers ! This is both interesting and useful.
Here is a gif of the game in action. Sorry for the poor quality, I wanted to keep the size of the gif small.

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I know the poor quality of the gif makes it hard to read, but what do you think of it ?
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Looks great. Ship it! :D
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Re: I need feedback about the graphics of my prototype

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Thank you it is very nice to hear that. 🥰
I’ll try my best !
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