song for a rpg!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hellfiresage]

ok i was on my piano composeing and came up with this. i know i'm not the best programmer but maybe a better composer. this song was ment for a in game rpg and is to be looped when played. im still comming up with a transition part for when you encounter an attack. please tell me your suggestions and if this is to be implemented in a game all i ask is to be credited. it doesn't yet have a name but, i thought it could be named depending where it is added in the game.

[osuf oboys]

I like it, albeit a bit short

You may also upload the song to and get comments at http://www.sakari-infinity.net/. It's probably for completed songs though.

[hellfiresage]

thanks

[qubodup]

It loops pretty good, longer would be of course be better.

The sound quality is very good, the instrument sounds good too.

[hellfiresage]

i think i might tweek it so its slower therefore longer.

[Skofo]

i think i might tweek it so its slower therefore longer.

I did it for you.

slowpoke.zip

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Also, I think a better place to upload this would be Newgrounds Audio, if you don't mind people using it for their non-commercial stuff. I was under the impression that this forum is for LOVE-related projects and demos.

[zapwow]

Hey,
Sounds decent, but there's an extra half-measure that shows up near the end that throws off the beat. It's extremely distracting.

[hellfiresage]

i see what you mean i'm gooing to look into that this evening.

[Tabasco]

This sounds pretty good. It's always nice to see some quality, open content.

Keep up the good work.

[hellfiresage]

thanks its not done yet. i have part of the transition done for if you were going to click on a player and enter a fight. im hopeing to upload it by next week.